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I'm so happy to see that right now. That is awesome and I'm so glad it's in better graphics than my POS laptop

And the angle is PERFECT. Now all it needs is slow motion and both players' perspectives.
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What? I'm just saying that flame thrower was shooting fucking lightning bolts!
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Lol, what a retarded circle, clearly the BC mountains nearby are also uninhabitable. Longitude isn't everything. And also some of that cirlce is greenland XD!!!!
Dude, I just scribbled it up real quick and posted it on photobucket so i could use it. It was implied thatI was only referring to the part that was Canada. It's just a vague idea of how bad most of Canada's climate is.
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Yeah, high standard of living sucks.
Yeah, and so does the fact that about 30% of your land is uninhabitable to all but natives.

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ABG, were you born to be a party pooper?
But seriously, why do you feel that way about them?
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Was that a new plasma gun for the pyro? It lights people on fire and instakills Soldiers? No wonder you died ABG, that superhero blazing pyro had and OP weapon.
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Friendless
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YES, THIS IS MY CHANCE!
http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=350217&no=31&weekday=tue
WHY THE FUCK DID THERE HAVE TO BE SOUND EFFECTS TOO!!!!!!!!! I HATE YOU SO MUCH! NOW I'M GONNA HAVE MORE NIGHTMARES ON TOP OF THE NIGHTMARES THE CREEPYPASTA THREAD GIVES ME!!!!
Anyway:
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It was in-character. I apologize if I offended anybody. My character is short tempered. Any side thoughts I have will be put in spoiler tags. All character thoughts will be italicized. Quoting another person will be in bright green text. Normal writing is what my character is speaking, and boldface writing is actions, from here on out.
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Oh, and I read your prologue. ME GUSTA MUCHO, SRAKE! I would like to say you should definitely keep this creepy suicidal story going strong. I support you all the way!
About your style, you should think about varying your sentence length a little more. Use periodic sentences more (look it up). You use consistently short sentences and it gives it a choppy feel (Though who am i to talk. My sentences are always so damn long, they either get confusing to the reader or they're just ridiculously long-winded.)
P.P.S.
Another great chapter. I'm really liking this story so far, flash is a really cool OCSUCK IT SRAKE!

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10/10 Your abnormally large anime boobs can hardly be contained by their holding straps. In other words, they're much like a
"Fat guy in a little coat!"
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LOL
Love you, ObsidianWhile we're on the topic of Mel Brooks and Gene Wilder:
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Suicidal
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*Groans
Ugh, what's taking everybody so god damn long. This is fucking ridiculous. I came for an adventure, not a tea party!
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Sure thing. I actually had about a month where I had absolutely zero inspiration and this just sat in the middle of Chapter 4, completely stagnant, so I'm just glad I stuck with this, and I would encourage you to do the same

Oh, BTW, Chapter 4 is FUCKING FINISHED, FINALLY!
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Dammit Chapter 4! Why can't you type yourself? My hands hurt, I'm tired, and this music is getting fucking annoying. I need silence. BUT I MUST PERSERVERE! CHAPTER 4 MUST GO UP TONIGHT!!!
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Medication
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Oh, DAT OBOE! That was an amazingly performed piece right there.
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Banned because I do kinda want RAGE, but I'd MUCH rather have Skyrim. You just can't beat 1000+ hours of epic gameplay.
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Soup Kitchen
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Careful with your OC's power levels Fluttershy. Unless you do it really well, people tend not to like OP OCs.
(I wrote a chapter of my fanfic... Nobody even said anything about it...)
Don't worry.
He lost to Dashy in their big race and in my next installment, he's going to have to call on a lot of help from others.
I always try to make sure I don't make OC's all-powerful.
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Sonic
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That cloaked bugger creeps me the fuck out
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Two of them in there. "What knockers!" and "Blucher!" *Neigh!*
Team Fortress 2
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