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Psychotic Ninja

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  1. (I never said you couldn't have 'Gorn', everytime BTG replaced a word with 'Gorn' it never made sense)

     

    Gorn formulated pink lighter fluid before inanimate suits and tribbles suggested performing magic.

     

    (Here, it makes sense cause 'Krendar', like 'Gorn' is a proper noun. Now the sentence makes sense, albeit, in a messed up way.)

  2. (The sentence structure will change if it flows into a change, like it has in the past. Like on page 15, it was TF2 themed, now it's about mythical creatures. As for the Gorn hating, it's not so much hate, it's more of you replacing words with 'Gorn' where it doesn't work. It's the same if you were to change any noun, verb, adverb, etc. with a proper noun, it just wouldn't flow.)

     

    Krendar absorbed pink lighter fluid before monkey suits and Khajiit suggested performing magic.

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