Jek Jek Roo
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Legos? Better use clay ;P
I'm working on a short story which I plan to write soon. It's nothing special - just an another plot with some characters. But what I wanted to do was avoiding Mary Sue and common model of a story. Finally I got 9 main characters (Main hero and most important "NPC's") and double threaded story. I mean I got two main characters at different time and their story is linked somehow together.
I wanted to write something about sea so in the story appears sea pirates, ship, fights but also elements of steampunk, and little magic.
It is a fantasy story but very, very low fantasy, with more "human" like characters than magic and stuff.
One of the two plots is about...
a small trade ship which after a huge storm deviates from his track onto unknown part of the sea. After hours of searching captain finally finds the way back, but on the horizon appears a small island with a bunch of little sharp rocks and cliffes. At first he ignores it but then the crew noticed a huge column of smoke above the land which appeard short after they get closer. That convinced them all to sail there and take a look at it. Captain though it might be a call for a help so he ordered to stop the ship here until they come back.
When he, and some crew memmbers get off the llittle boat nobody was awaiting on the beach. The captain was a fine warrior as his crew mates, so without a fear (because he also though it might be a pirate trap) they went deeper on the island looking for the deserters.
There were no signs of humans. The only thing they found was a huge round place, sorrouned by cliffes, with a small lake in the middle, over which sculptured out of gray stone a monterious big snake. One of the crew member found between rocks a human statue perfectly sized and detailed.
They found out that it was a gorgone's hideout. The old witch with a power of turning people into a stone, and with snake hair could be watching them and tempted them to get in there. The captain ordered to quickly leave the island. Suddenly they heard a scream of a man. It was one of their man. Nobody saw how he got backstabbed. He was injured but still alive so they took him and quickly got back on their ship.
I'm not going to write more because I don't want to. All I can tell you, they didn't leave the island alone.. And they had to prepared for a fight after they arrived.
This is only an introduction.
And shit happens, I don't care about my poor lack of knowing grammar well. Too bad if you can't understand it Lololololololololololololol. Whatever, I'm going to write the whole story in my first language anyway.
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Ssssssss.....
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Gahhhh I want to write something but I don't know what. And in what language...
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Yay! The forum has almost a year!
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When I was a kid tv characters would get together and hang out when they where not on
Same.
When I was a kid I thought every country has their own language. Like in Europe, I didn't know in Australia, Scotland, Canada, New Zealand people use the same english grammar and stuff but there is Canadian language, Scotish and Australian xD and they are all different.
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6/10
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So... We already have Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, AppleJack... I can remember someone was Twilight Sparkle. And I was Discord.
That's all cool!
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Where is this?
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Etwas...
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Yesterday lack of the Internet connection ruined my chance to watch it. But today I'm gonna do it as fast as I can :]
I'm glad to see another new episode!
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Who is who? D=
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I'm affraid of opening my fridge - ponies are bloody everywhere! :0
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Shiiiiiiiiit...
World premiere - 11 Feb
In Poland - 27 April -WTF
I WANT THIS MOVIE NOW!!!!
D:<<<<<<
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Portal gun + Gordon Freeman =No
But...
Portal World + Half Life World = I'm okay with that.
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[...]Also I don't like the whole using character names as usernames in general.
Same...
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And I am "Jek Jek Roo [AF]"

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I got this game few days ago, and I must say - this game is pretty good. The graphics and animations looks very oldschool, but this is actually a huge plus.
I've already build a small fortress to keep my character safe from monsters. But, of course, If I spend more time on it, I'm sure I'll create something worth showing here :3
This game has a lot of good potential.
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Well... At least it has ended good.
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We had one but it's gone now. Talk to the BTGbullseye - he knows more.
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Bill! Heal me!
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8/10
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10/10 for quoting Freemans Mind ep 28

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another boring meme xD