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Doctor Felix Whooves

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  1. My interest for fanfics was ruined when I read one I do not remember the name of. Without getting to specific, it was a story about roseluck, braeburn and some chick who eats babies.

    The fan fic you are talking about is called "The Horror The Horror"

  2. Do it then. I'll be over here, waiting with bated breath.

    I won't but I will tell you the mane idea

     

    4 ponies are in a room, no way out, 3 are tied up, there is a blade in the corner. A voice comes from a speaker in the ceiling telling the ponie that is not tide up that he needs to kill one of the tide up ponies and that he must choose. If he dose nothing all of the tied up ponies will be killed slowly and painfully. But if he kills just one they will all be killed quickly. If he kills 2 then he and the last tied up ponie will be set free. The story will be tolled from the ponie that is not tied up.

  3. On a darker note, I read the fan fiction My Little Dashie. Has anyone else read this? It's supposed to be the saddest fan fiction ever written in MLPdom; people say they ball their eyes out at the end. I printed it off and read it a few nights ago when I was alone by myself.

     

    At the end, I felt a lump in my throat on the verge of a few tears, but I wasn't crying per se. I felt like there was something wrong with me. I think it's the fact that I just finished reading Atlas Shrugged which has the most beautiful and poetic writing I ever read in my entire life (seriously, even if you don't agree with the philosophy, the imagery and the metaphors are like nothing you've ever read before--but I digress), and that My Little Dashie has spelling errors, grammar errors, run-on sentences and comma splices. I was also thinking about a lot of heavy stuff that was going on in my life that was unrelated to the story. I think I was also tired when I read it; it was about 5 a.m. when I finished it.

     

    I really like the story that the guy tried to tell and I really feel like he was making an effort to make me feel the emotions he wanted me to feel; I just think it could've been executed better. Nonetheless, it was a story I was glad to read--and when I'm not as tired and when I don't have any serious pressing issues at hand, I'll probably read it again.

     

    On another note, I like to think of this story as the inverse Cupcakes. Where Cupcakes had a terrible story but incredibly well-executed writing (so I'm told), My Little Dashie has a great story but terrible-writing (the writing is ok, but it could have been a hell-of-a-lot better).

    I've read My Little Dashy, I cried... a lot.

     

    I've also read Cupcakes and that got me thinking about hove easy it would be for me to top that

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    I liked the old Derpy voice. It was good. This new one is like a kick to the crotch. We get a nod from the creators and have a fan-character go canon, then this. Such bullshit is intolerable...

     

    Okay, when did we get a new Applejack and a Doctor Whooves. I extend my greetings to the both of you.

    Welcome back! I'm glad your here

     

    Bro hoof!

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