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Obsidian

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  1. Not a bad review. For such a large game, I think you summed the major points fairly well. I've noticed in your reviews that you sometimes write as if you were talking to someone (I noticed a lot of informal structuring and repetitive useage of sentence structures and wording). This works only sometimes, so my feelings are that you shouldn't do it too often. Also, I'm not sure what your goal in these reviews are (I've read them all so far), but they all have a hit and run feel to them. You explain a lot in a very short amount of time and this makes each statement (in my opinion, at least) feel less important. I'd be more interested to know what specific parts of the game really got your goat (no pun intended) and how they made you feel and why they did, parts that other reviewers don't touch on because they don't see any value in doing so, than I would be in your opinions about basic elements that plenty of people have covered already. Plus, in respect to this review, feel free to spoil some stuff (I'm of the belief that you can spoil some parts of the game, especially with Fallout 3, without ruining it for first-time players) to give your review a little more depth than the "spoiler-free" reviews seen across the nets.

     

    Otherwise, I think this review was pretty good. I'm seeing some small improvements with each review you post here. Keep it up!

  2. So what are people thinking of the upcoming episode? Excited, ready to be disappointed? I'm somewhere in the middle. The wiki synopsis doesn't exactly make me think it's going to be worth the two week wait.

  3. Wow, Blue, that response was certainly out of the blue... what?

     

    Actually, I would've thought you were referring to health anyway when you mentioned a smartstart breakfast. Having a good meal to kick off the day can really help your immune system, after all.

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