Mr. ShinyObject
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Times like this make me sad that I don't have an OC
Technically everyone in our fic is either your or my OC.
Though honestly the only reason I ever made an OC was because lots of people kept asking if I had one so I said fine I'll make one. That one just happens to be my ponysona as well (I gave him my skin tone and the blonde hair I had as a kid, plus I wear a watch every day and wore a purple hoodie just about every day Freshman year of college). Then I came up with a pegasus OC that is an actual OC (cutie mark, backstory, personality, everything). Then I made a half-assed Earth pony OC because you need to have one of each.
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Vectoring.
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Lost what?
Whatever you call our constant bickering about which of us is the coolest brony. Just wait until he does you OC, you'll start bowing down to him too.
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Welp, record is gone. Thanks a lot, JJR.
It kind of sucks that I had to crop out EVERYTHING, which is too bad because I like it as a whole. BUT DAMN IT EVEN CROPPED TO HELL IT LOOKS GOOD.
Double Chuck, Rarity/Blighty, Flutters, we lost. We all lost. A lot.
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JEK JEK ROO. STOP BEING AMAZING. JUST STOP IT. RIGHT NOW.

YOU'RE GOING TO MAKE ME BREAK MY RECORD OF HAVING THE SAME AVATAR FOR A YEAR. STOP. IT'S JUST TOO BAD ASS.
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I <3 you too.pony_for_a_friend_by_jekjekroo-d59f51h.jpg -
Trying to figure out all this bullshit.

Ditto.
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OT: Glaring at Shiny through the fourth wall.

why what did I do Oh no, you're not derailing this thread again.
Writing.
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Just thought this should be shared:
http://www.pixartouchbook.com/blog/2011/5/15/pixar-story-rules-one-version.html
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Illustratoring, but for money this time.
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The other day I was in a European market and saw a 31 dollar bottle of Balsamic vinegar. And after tilting the bottle and seeing the consistency, the color, the viscosity, it literally brought a tear to my eye. As soon as I get 31 dollars, I am going back there and buying that bottle.
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This week in super hot cosplay:

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Scoffing derisively.
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or Christopher Sitting
also known as Cristopher Reeves oh god I'm a horrible person
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EDIT: bigger than I thought, spoiler'd

Too true, too true.
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Now here's some food for though. I would personally find it absolutely hilarious if I managed to achieve Internet/Brony fame whilst you two keep up with your back-and-forth. Although it won't happen most likely, it would still be funny as hell.
It is entirely possible.
EDIT: FUCK THAT LISTEN TO THIS
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Why doesn't anyone submit this stuff?! I get 300 random techno tracks with scratch on top but never the cool things ! -
Worrying about CWBFF's leg.
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That video is amazing. The music, the video, damn that guy's good.
Also Y U NO introduce me? Hogging him all to yourself. Though honestly I wouldn't even know what to say. And his videos are more similar to your credits sequence and shiropoint thing than to my PMVs. So I guess nevermind.
GOD IT'S STILL IN MY HEAD.
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All of my wat
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Depending on how it's cooked, and how well it's cooked, there could be a multitude of flaws with it. Though bacon itself has few flaws besides the horrendous things it does to your arteries.
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Mowing the lawn.
Mow money mow problems.
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I will point out all the flaws of anything you throw at me!

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Honestly, this isn't the kind of fic I would read or maybe even enjoy. I never had the urge to read My Little Dashie, and never liked throwing in humans. Also the second paragraph was uncomfortable to read.
However, I consider myself objective enough that I can offer feedback on things I don't like other than "I don't like it."
Good writing style, wish I could see how well you do dialogue (and no, that doesn't mean point me to another fic of yours).
We get very little personality out of the main character. We know what happens to him and what he's forced to do, but not how he is responding to it, other than the little bits of characterization in the narration.
You're riding the fine line in that your narrator is so bored by the standard routine yet you need him to describe in detail this boring routine that he really doesn't care about.
There's a difference between making a character so pathetic the audience roots for him to stop being pathetic and one that they just give up on because he's so sad they don't want to get more sad by reading more about him.
That is a very short chapter one. That could just be me, though, seeing as how my fic is 18,000 words strong at 2 chapters.
In general, it's hard to say much by this point. There's just not a lot to go on. Also, nothing's really happened yet.
Oh, and about google docs: click the big blue button that says "share," then click change and select "anyone with the link" and then say "can comment." Something like that, at least.
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Reading Foal's fic (btw, this isn't the thread to be discussing it).
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