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Poem I Wrote for School

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Here is a poem that I had to create for school. Tell me what you think! The form is a villanelle, a very hard form to write.

 

I lay here on my bed,

staring at the stars,

a while ago the sky was red.

 

Thinking of all I love and dread,

of this planet that is now ours,

I lay here on my bed.

 

The darkness weighs me down like lead,

Save for the moon and its deep scars,

a while ago the sky was red.

 

I think of all the places upon which I desire to tread,

places such as Mars,

I lay here on my bed.

 

The books that I have read,

taking me places afar,

a while ago the sky was red.

 

The sun comes up, fiery red,

Shining brightly, drowning out those stars.

I lay here on my bed,

now again the sky is red.

\m/ (^_^) \m/

Rock on.

 

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/ \ This is Bob. Copy and paste Bob and soon he will take over internetz!

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Very nice bro, I like it. Great A-B-A rhyme scheme and all together great style ":)

This is the end of the line, and I'll rip you apart for what's inside.

Compensating wealth for what's more and more worthlessness.

The end of fear, the end of your life, I'll kill you right now, fucking die.

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