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It made me feel a bit tired at the beginning, but it started to get better around 1:00.

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Be glad I'm not sleep deprived (at least not as sleep deprived as I usually am :mrgreen:).

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Feedback:

 

-The little intro portion seemed to drag just a tad.

-It was alittle bland, and didn't seem to escalate or anything.

 

Keep at it you got plenty of time to improve, I look forward to listening to more of your tracks in future.

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What exactly were you aiming to present? Just so I know how to critique this.

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Don't take this badly, but the sound to me was uninteresting... It didn't hold my attention, I was expecting exactly what came next, and it moved a bit too slow...

 

That's my take on it, but you do have a better start than most I've heard, and I definitely can't do better personally.

Don't insult me. I have trained professionals to do that.

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Yeah, I'm going to redo some stuff and extend it out a little longer.

 

Also, for the people who asked, it is supposed to be slow and relaxing.

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I like it!

IMO it sounded like futuristic elevator music.

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