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HLPrincess

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  1. Actually I've been to Electronic Beats Festival yesterday/today and comparing to what these guys were doing, this is pretty monotone ;p I'd cut the part of the beginning and enter the noises earlier I iked the "Stinger" track much more It's nice!
  2. Actually, I'm (dark/moderate) blonde naturally! Hunting for Freeman in the city! Which girl doesn't love that?! AHAHAHAH (stupid laugh, drools) Any of you had sitaution like that? Eye candies... mmmmm
  3. I have just very dim understanding of the lyrics... but the song sounds cool, the girl is cool and the Harry Potter guy and the dancing black guy are coll as well.... SOMEONE TELL ME HOW TO POST A LINK TO A YOUTUBE VID THAT ACTUALLY DISPLAYS THE VIDEO ????????
  4. Without Machinima I'd mostly probably never come across Ross' videos... And most of the Forum members can say the same!
  5. LOLZ. Now that you've written it all here, Ross will make sure not to use any of these ideas or anything similar And I like this one!
  6. I liked the story and I'd like to know what happened next? a tough fight? A maze of corridors? More nightmare?? Mutants? Especially that you have much more descriptions but they're not boring for me (so far )I never have patience for long descriptions, especially the static ones......
  7. No, I write English stories originally in English. Why do you ask? I can rewrite it only for a very special reason... Actually I was thinking about writing this one in Polish too... I guess because it's so awesome! EDIT: HERE YOU CAN FIND BOTH CHAPTERS OF THE STORY, WITH THE SECOND THAT I'M TOO SHY TO PUBLISH HERE http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8057525/1/The_bRecluse_b
  8. Well, yes! But this is to the extreme... You won't see that in Freeman's Mind I'm just crossing the line in here I already wrote second chapter but I feel shy to post it here It's just going the way that some ppl wouldn't like But I like it....
  9. Thank you Razor So you're allright with paranoid Freeman?
  10. Aww you all look cute or amazing or psycho And definietly many of guys likes beards... At least these who can grow a beard I wonder why... I'm gonna have to put a pic of myself too... Not sure what for
  11. I can se we're going fashionable with story writing! I can compete with a pony (Actually I don't like competeing in art...) I wrote this yesterday night with a sudden struck of inspiration by a song of the same title...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s5TxIynodew&ob=av3e << Enjoy my story and feel free to comment EDIT: HERE YOU CAN FIND BOTH CHAPTERS OF THE STORY, WITH THE SECOND THAT I'M TOO SHY TO PUBLISH HERE http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8057525/1/The_bRecluse_b He was closed. For all. The room was closed. He took of the suit off and all he had left was underwear. He felt like the suit attracts them. He had to get rid of it! But also, it was impossible, because he was already shut down in this old bunker. He hoped it was a bunker. The door was solid, sound doesn't travel beyond this space. They won't, they can't find him. He hid his head in his arms, sitting in fetal position. That was the best he could do for now… Before he dies. It felt so close, so damn close… But still far away, until he stayed in this dark and pretty warm space. His body was in pain. Not because of physical effort… He was so much in stress, the whole body couldn't handle it anymore. Sweat was dripping down and he got a glimpse of a thought, he'd get dehydrated before a fast zombie can run down to him, carrying this horrible scream. He pressed his back closer to the soulless surface of the wall. It was solid, cold, dirty and covered in these cheap, color drained tiles. This could be some creepy bathroom in some mental institution… Even better. It fits him. He heard a very distant howling… and moaned shortly himself, in terror. "Shit" Said to himself with broken voice. "I'm such a coward…I'm just finished…" He slowly stretched his arms and body in order to move to the other part of his hideout…or rather, to crawl there. The body was stiff and even in all it's glory it looked tired and weak. He knew he's not thinking clear, although it wasn't clear to him what is true or false lately… The fear felt so real, filling in his body like a broken dish… dripping slowly from up, to the bottom. And barely flowing away… Just enough so he could flex some muscles, that's all. The howl repeated again and it wasn't so distant anymore. "Oh my god!" He cried and panicked. "And I don't even believe in god…"Commented quietly, as if he wanted to calm himself… He looked around in haze, barely seeing abandoned suit in the dim light. His eyes were wide open and shining with fear. It was stupid to leave the suit! It was idiotic to let himself to use all the ammo and then just lose his crowbar. The dirty and rusty floor appeared so unfriendly, the light started blinking slightly and he froze cold with a vision of being buried in the dark. With no weapon and no protection whatsoever. And the ear tearing moan came from even closer. His breathing became so heavy that he felt almost like collapsing but managed not faint, yet. His pupils must had been widened to the maximum. He moved quickly to his feet and ran to the other end of the room. "They gonna kill me. They gonna kill me. I'm gonaa turn me into zombie, like they've always wanted!" Depressing spiral of thoughts wouldn't let go! "I'm a fool! If they will ever find me...Unless I come out … No!" His feet got wounded several times. He turned right and saw a long corridor. It was so surprising. He expected to be completely isolated here. No, he wasn't thinking clearly at all… He touched his forehead and closed his eyes. "They gonna kill me… Infect my brain…" Cold fear dipped down his brain once more. He took a deep breath. His whole body was so cold… The scream came just from behind his back. He just completely lost it. He ran and ran… and ran. Time was speeding up and slowing down in the same time. All the objects became blurry. He completely forgot his name. He was so scared, so scared, like never before… The zombies were deadly. "Gordon!" "Aaarghh!" A total scream of insanity. He jumped on the creature that said his name but some other hands pulled him back and held. He wanted to struggle, yet was already completely exhausted. The hard to recognize figure appeared to be a woman. She looked really worried but he had a very big difficulty to recognize any emotions. He thought she still plans to kill him! "Jesus Christ! Gordon! It's you?" Her eyes were showing surprise and worry. She spoke with very gently and caring voice, with her gun down. "Put him down boys… And … Give him water and something to cover!" He just collapsed to the floor like a dummy. Someone gave him a bottle so he tried to drink but his hand was too shaky. Someone helped him. "No way Alyx, he's in shock. A deep one… He may not even recognize you now…" Said some other man. But were they real? The moan didn't repeat anymore, so maybe they were that zombies? He just wanted to run away from here. "I must say I've never seen him like that. It's just… I'm in shock myself now." "Are you zombies?" Said the man quietly. The woman almost cried. His voice was so weak. "Are you gonna kill me?" She wanted to hug him, but the other man showed with a gesture it's not a good idea. They gave him a blanket, that was good enough. She put her gun on the floor and gently approached, still keeping some distance. He looked at her as she squatted to be on the same level and look into his eyes. She reached her hand but he shuddered abruptly. His eyes were almost unconscious as he really couldn't recognize her. He couldn't tell who is human or not anymore. Although he tried to focus. "Gordon, it's me…Alyx." He wrinkled his forehead."Alyx… I know you…"He whispered. "Are you a zombie too?" She sighted deeply and looked up for a second, trying to handle this weight. "No matter what you think or feel now… You are safe Gordon. We killed all the zombies. " "Even the one that was chasing me? They gonna kill me…. They want my brain!" He was so determined. BAM! A loud shotgun shot echoed from a distant room. "Yeah! I got the fast one!" Shouted an enthusiastic male voice and some other cheered. "Oh my god! Thanks god!" Gordon closed his eyes and started crying.
  12. I think they're all ugly and amazingly unesthetic
  13. "bardzo długa kanapka" which means "a very long sandwich"
  14. Yeah, I used a bunch of Ross' Gordon to construct my Gordon, but I wanted to make him a nicer and more human person In the stories when he is younger, his personality is also different, because he's changed Wow, it's nice you can relate to the "Broken heart story" because I got one message from a guy who was complaining and hated the idea of Freeman being so weak and as he said "with no balls" or guts He just couldn't stand that! But as we all can see, you can make Freeman any kind of personality you want and Ross gets a credit for giving me very interesting base to develop Gordon. I have to remind you that I didn't write it to fit FM protagonist, but to feed my own idea of Gordon
  15. Thanks saja! It really makes me feel happier I know there are gramatic mistakes but I just keep on writing, if I was focuisng on that, I'd write maybe half of it I love to write so it's so nice!!! Which story you liked the most? However, I haven't translated these stories to English, I wrote them originally in English as an experiemnt, which actually works! It misses lots of vocabulary and some ease that I use in Polish but the style and dialogues are exactly as I do it in Polish
  16. You forgot that thanks to Machinima most of us, inluding me, was ever able to get to Ross videos and thanks to Machinima he can get income for the videos he makes. So he can focus on his creativity instead of working for someone else
  17. LOLZ Well, nice you asked, because I actually find it rude if someone assumes I even need improvemen My style was overloaded and pretty chaotic when I started writing stories... when I was more or less 11 So you are one of these nice people... Many times, not considering obvious grammar mistakes, the good/bad story is a question of your taste, not a real criticism.... At least I noticed that on my Polish stories opinions.... Can't please all the people! Polish is one of the hardest languages to learn....I almost doubt how my country is not an economic empire yet, if we can use this freakin super complexed language all the time!
  18. Oh wow! Well I just want people to enjoy it if they like the stories. I don't really like criticism or advices of my writing, esp. that in Polish I don't do any of the mistakes I do in English and my vocabulary is 5 times more varied I preserved my writing style though And I'm almost allergic on "tips for improvement" as I've learnt to write stories all by myself and avoided any tips for improvement from other people every time someone wanted to advice something.... Yeah, long way to say "no, thank you". If I ever feel like it and you feel like it too, I'll ask you for that
  19. What kind of fuck is considered here? Like 100% sex or just certain body parts sex? ^_^ I haven't watched the video yet. Apparently you had these kinds of vids too.... I thought they happened only in post communist Europe.... There is one guy who makes similar videos on 80'&90's Polish TV shows and news... He's awesome. I wonder if I'll like this guy's style too....
  20. Well yes, I invite you to read some of my fan fiction stories of Gordon of course. Doing some light self-promotion I write since always but I've started writing in English as an experiment and took Gordon as my subject as I wanted to have maximum pleasure in using this difficult language I even started an erotic story So, lot's of to choose from. I give you some of the fanfics!Hope you'll give them a chance: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7908032/1/A_Doubtful_Adventure_of_Gordon_Freeman http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7924832/1/Gordons_Stash_The_Times_Before_Black_Mesa http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7937368/1/Broken_Heart_Freeman_Times_Before_Black_Mesa http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7982473/1/A_man_of_few_words_and_many_talents Gordon & Alyx! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8031522/1/I_was_Gordon_Freeman_once_and_felt_like_protecting My Dream as Freeman - Yes, I played too much HL 2 a few night in a row and I dreamed I'm actually him! Yeah , I'm a psychofan.... Stopped playing so much after that.... I love writing and I always think I want readers to enjoy my stories! Please feel free to comment!
  21. Eddie is the guy to who you call to, every time you have some problems with the police/mafia/drug dealers/your ex/your mum/the dean OR guns, drugs, skulls, snuff movies, jewelerry, credit cards numbers to buy/sell.
  22. I hope this post shut up all the grumbling people... I think there shouldn't be any labels who donated at all. This will turn the forum into some kinf of competition field and the ones who don't donate will feel excluded. And even more if you put numbers on the labels. I thik it's better to make some kind of >>>WALL OF FAME (as far as I remember Nine Inch Nails had sth like that when they were collecting money for some noble reason, no labels on the forums tho) in a "separate" place. It's more symbolic and doesn't make people show off every time they make a post
  23. Oh yes, indeed That means it stand out so much that Machinima wants to promote it even more! And Freeman in the promo video looks cool! Check out the artwork on their Facebook http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=356631347708972&set=a.355616207810486.78842.347642065274567&type=1&theater
  24. Oh wow! That would be dope! I'd buy a car just to have that! Wait... I'll buy a car anyway!
  25. New "block" of the best shows of Machinima with FM in it!!! YEAH! "Machinima Happy Hour Machinima Happy Hour is home to the best animation and shorts Machinima has to offer. Check back every weekend for updates on all your favorite shows like Sanity Not Included, Two Best Friends Play, Freeman's Mind, Sonic For Hire and more!" So FM is one of the best shows to watch during weekends... it should be the only show! ^^ link to the Happy Hour channel, watch the promo, it's pretty funny! http://www.youtube.com/user/happyhour
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